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Lovetides |
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Pubster of Renown
Posts: 2447 (07/24/08 10:21:32) Pubster of Renown |
Beautiful petals fall in lightly-faded gatherings.
to yesterday's residence.
Memories stack up
keeps focus.
promise returns,
Last Edited By: jantanleo 07/25/08 10:10:38.
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Pubster of Renown
Posts: 2565 (07/24/08 10:45:29) |
Very picturesque and lovely Jan.
I too enjoyed yours 
Great ending! |
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Pubster of Renown
Posts: 2447 (07/24/08 11:17:18) Pubster of Renown |
Karen,
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Posts: 4165 (07/24/08 22:25:50) Moderator |
we are all pulled by those tides...
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Pubster of Renown
Posts: 2447 (07/25/08 08:58:54) Pubster of Renown |
That's right WD, and somehow it balances out over time & space
with all of us somewhere in between.
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Pubster of Renown
Posts: 745 (07/25/08 09:55:35) Pubster of Renown |
Jan,
Nice portrayal of the journey home. WID
Last Edited By: walkingindarkness
07/25/08 11:30:59.
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Pubster of Renown
Posts: 2447 (07/25/08 10:06:37) Pubster of Renown |
Hello WID,
Those lovetides keep bringing us back to shore. (home) And there's no place like it...no place like home. Thanks for your reply.
Jan |
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Posts: 44713 (07/25/08 20:07:22) Administrative |
Jan,
They leave the nest and they return. We know they will be back but that is little consolation on the day they go...the day that we prepared them for from birth. Life is certainly one big dichotomy, and the love of family brings order to the chaos. Brava!! sarah |
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Posts: 3399 (07/25/08 22:05:06) Venerable Pubstar |
Jan,
this is sweet and straight from a mom's heart! Dee |
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Pubster of Renown
Posts: 649 (07/26/08 07:48:40) Noted Pubstar |
and they will be back--sometimes with boxes and boxes
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