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			<title><![CDATA[ My Lovely Horse (2007) ]]></title>
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			<description><![CDATA[ My Lovely <span class="il">Horse</span>,
<br>
Running through the field
<br>
Where are you going with your
<br>
fetlocks blowing in the wind
<br>
I want to shower you with sugar lumps
<br>
and ride you over fences
<br>
And every six months
<br>
take you to the <span class="il">horse</span> dentist
<br>
<br>
My lovely <span class="il">horse</span>
<br>
you&#39;re a pony no more
<br>
Riding around with a man on your back
<br>
like a train in the night, like a train in the night ]]></description>

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			<pubDate>Mon, 06 Jul 2009 23:25:32 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ Burn The Witches ]]></title>
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			<description><![CDATA[ <p><strong><font size="5"><font size="4">~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
<br>
Burn The Witches!</font></font></strong></p>

<p><font size="4">Some locals are condemning Halloween.
<br>
&quot;Abolish it!&quot;
<br>
Is their hue and cry.</font></p>

<p><font size="4">70 is the average age
<br>
in a town of 8 bars
<br>
and 33 churches.</font></p>

<p><font size="4">...........Are old women
<br>
in the woods with walkers
<br>
performing satanic rituals?</font></p>

<p><font... ]]></description>

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			<pubDate>Fri, 03 Apr 2009 15:31:23 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ Transparent ]]></title>
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			<description><![CDATA[ <font size="4">Weasels won&#39;t wallow in pity
<br>
And cattle don&#39;t cry when alone.
<br>
Chipmunks aren&#39;t mean chumps that sling nuts,
<br>
To harry the neighbor&#39;s new home.
<br>
<br>
Meerkats aren&#39;t making malicious
<br>
and Mynas don&#39;t mean to malign.
<br>
Raccoons aren&#39;t racked with resentment
<br>
Toward cheeky rooster&#39;s incline.
<br>
<br>
The dally of doves is willfull,
<br>
They dawdle desiring to dine
<br>
On crumbs prying pigeons might miss,
<br>
Or... ]]></description>

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			<pubDate>Sun, 29 Mar 2009 20:05:39 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ Metaphor ]]></title>
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			<description><![CDATA[ <p><font color="#008080" size="4"><font color="#008080" size="4"><font color="#FF6633">I once compared the poet to a hurdy gurdy player:
<br></font>
<br>
<br>
Every evening,
<br>
in &quot;Ile de la Cité&quot;
<br>
The hurdy gurdy player
<br>
would wheel his music cart
<br>
out to the park.</font></font></p>

<p><font color="#008080" size="4"><font color="#008080" size="4">On his shoulder,
<br>
in short breeches
<br>
and an usher&#39;s cap,
<br>
sat a monkey with a tin cup.
<br>
<br>
The hurdy... ]]></description>

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			<pubDate>Tue, 24 Mar 2009 13:46:51 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ the knight ]]></title>
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			<description><![CDATA[ slap stick life humor.
<br>
<br>
<br>
a man looks his whole life
<br>
he look high and low,town to town
<br>
nation to nation for the one
<br>
he goes through wars,sceenes of death and horror
<br>
and the one was in his next door nabors house the whole time...waiting.
<br>
<br>
an old couple swings on a front porch as the sun goes down
<br>
they wish upon venus as it shines its white light over all stars
<br>
they hope with every fiber of their being
<br>
they concentrate very hard for that... ]]></description>

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			<pubDate>Mon, 09 Feb 2009 16:46:21 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ Casualty of a divorce. ]]></title>
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			<description><![CDATA[ he sits in a corner
<br>
fingers discreetly
<br>
wipe treacherous tears.
<br>
father never came
<br>
my son says
<br>
with a nonchalance
<br>
studied.
<br>
my heart clenches
<br>
I reach out
<br>
into this splintered world.
<br>
we sit in clotted silence
<br>
his head droops
<br>
onto my shoulder.
<br>
<br>
let him dream
<br>
of warm sunshine
<br>
of balloons,blue clouds
<br>
of clowns,cookies
<br>
a sea of happy faces.
<br>
<br>
let him wake
<br>
with my kiss
<br>
and I will hope
<br>
this... ]]></description>

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			<author>feeds@yuku.com (phoenix)</author>
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			<pubDate>Mon, 22 Dec 2008 01:00:36 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ Fallen. ]]></title>
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			<description><![CDATA[ Am I sprouting wings?
<br>
I feel the urge
<br>
to step off this
<br>
precipice.
<br>
to unleash the
<br>
restlessness gathering
<br>
within.
<br>
to graze the
<br>
bowels of earth
<br>
feathers singed
<br>
sooty speckled
<br>
molten fire
<br>
singing through
<br>
my veins.
<br>
to swoop into
<br>
this slate sky
<br>
screams puncturing
<br>
a listless moon. ]]></description>

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			<pubDate>Sat, 06 Dec 2008 06:23:09 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ Icicles ]]></title>
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			<description><![CDATA[ <font size="2"><br>
Around us these others cannot see the city
<br>
through the lower leaves of a ginkgo tree:
<br>
<br>
The skyscrapers, the temples, the pond
<br>
between it and them. Their jungle
<br>
<br>
is filled with excuses ―
<br>
a scandal, a mask, a palimpsest.
<br>
<br>
I use a metaphor and Jin hears
<br>
imperative ― something about a following power
<br>
<br>
too close to the surface.
<br>
A cup of coffee warming her hands,
<br>
<br>
my woman watches the light hit a wall-mart... ]]></description>

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			<author>feeds@yuku.com (Yejun)</author>
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			<pubDate>Sat, 08 Nov 2008 07:06:57 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ wanna go back to the bridge ]]></title>
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			<description><![CDATA[ <p>wanna go back to the bridge
<br>
dont even want to write this
<br>
go back to you and me and nothingness
<br>
remember talking about grits there
<br>
feel like grinding everything up now just like them
<br>
all the gaps between everyone
<br>
alone
<br>
but people are
<br>
coming in from the sky
<br>
rising out of the dirt
<br>
motorcycles in your living room
<br>
grind up thought too
<br>
that just makes me think
<br>
Im in what my mind created
<br>
while each tiny atom everywhere
<br>... ]]></description>

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			<author>feeds@yuku.com (OCTOGENARIAN)</author>
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			<pubDate>Tue, 21 Oct 2008 23:11:39 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ Twilight Wind, a glosa ]]></title>
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			<description><![CDATA[ <p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt">A glossa, using another poets lines/verse, you first state that verse, then writing ten lines you use each
line of their verse for an ending line and your verse has to expand on theirs. the 6th, 9th and last lines have to ryhme. Try it, it is harder than you
think.</p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt">From a verse in &quot;The Wind at Twilight&quot;</p>

<p... ]]></description>

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			<pubDate>Sat, 11 Oct 2008 13:38:24 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ Eulogy in D minor ]]></title>
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			<description><![CDATA[ <p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt">Eulogy in D minor
<br>
<br></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt">Again
<br>
the world</p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt">fades away,</p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt">all the colours</p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt">turned shades of grey.</p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt"></p>

<p>I looked around to see...
<br>
wonder if this could really be.
<br>... ]]></description>

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			<pubDate>Wed, 24 Sep 2008 19:32:06 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ the point of conceiving ]]></title>
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			<description><![CDATA[ <p><font size="2">How were you conceived?</font></p>

<p><font size="2">In love of course, on crisp white sheets</font></p>

<p><font size="2">That your mother had washed and pressed</font></p>

<p><font size="2">The day before.</font></p>

<p><font size="2">Lights out, lights on, the details escape me</font></p>

<p><font size="2">But one thing is certain, it wasn&#39;t done in a hurry.</font></p>

<p><font size="2">Or it might have been on the bedroom floor</font></p>

<p><font... ]]></description>

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			<author>feeds@yuku.com (evowayne)</author>
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			<pubDate>Tue, 16 Sep 2008 13:56:11 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ Son of my Father ]]></title>
			<link>http://thepeacefulpub.yuku.com/topic/18819/t/Son-of-my-Father.html</link>
			<description><![CDATA[ <p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt"><font size="2">Son of my Father</font></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt"><font size="2">A man in quiet desperation, sits and reads the tomes,</font></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt"><font size="2">written by other hands, the words are his lore.</font></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt"><font size="2">He understands the ancient wars... ]]></description>

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			<author>feeds@yuku.com (ohsteve)</author>
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			<pubDate>Mon, 15 Sep 2008 08:18:39 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ Still ]]></title>
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			<description><![CDATA[ Still
<br>
<br>
<br>
Blinds drawn against a darkened lawn,
<br>
and there, framed within each
<br>
sodden, leafy blade -
<br>
a glimpse of you.
<br>
<br>
Imprisoned in a prism of streetlight;
<br>
through dew your face draws clarity,
<br>
like the proton ghost of a Savior
<br>
impressed upon a blanket for the dead.
<br>
<br>
My mind traces your figure
<br>
with the finger
<br>
of a memory sieved through window screens -
<br>
cutting out your form with words,
<br>
<br>
formed when you dropped... ]]></description>

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			<author>feeds@yuku.com (Cicada Rising)</author>
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			<pubDate>Wed, 25 Jun 2008 19:00:50 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ June ]]></title>
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			<description><![CDATA[ <p>June
<br>
<br>
I.
<br>
<br>
The most miserable thing about June
<br>
are the peaches -
<br>
how the peach tree goes untended,
<br>
sprawling across the ground
<br>
like a worn-out dog;
<br>
hardly stirred
<br>
by the wind
<br>
and flies.
<br>
<br>
Every year the peaches
<br>
get eat up by Junebugs,
<br>
worms, and squirrels -
<br>
gnawed and discarded
<br>
before any ever
<br>
get fat enough to fall.
<br>
<br>
Green peaches
<br>
rots slow,
<br>
leaving the grass pockmarked
<br>
and... ]]></description>

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			<pubDate>Mon, 23 Jun 2008 14:36:44 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ Cavalcade ]]></title>
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			<description><![CDATA[ <font color="#191970" size="5"><strong>Cavalcade
<br>
<br></strong></font><font color="#0000FF">We&#39;ve only been till lately, at a loss
<br>
of the breadth of majesty and power
<br>
of galaxies ten trillion miles across,
<br>
spinning &#39;round a million miles an hour!
<br>
We&#39;ve only spent these past four hundred years
<br>
picturing our nearest neighbor planets;
<br>
a scant five decades launching new careers
<br>
breaking free of gravity and granite.
<br>
What once we wore, the... ]]></description>

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			<author>feeds@yuku.com (Collumcille)</author>
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			<pubDate>Thu, 19 Jun 2008 13:20:01 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ Self Assessed.............. Roundel for Sarah, by invitation. ]]></title>
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			<description><![CDATA[ <strong><font color="#191970" size="5">Self Assessed
<br>
<br></font>I suppose it&#39;d be best to say nothing
<br>
while slumbering canines lie in repose;
<br>
but I do get fed up with tongue biting,
<br>
I suppose.
<br>
<br>
I was not called to writing, I chose;
<br>
yet I can&#39;t claim to do this very thing
<br>
if I&#39;ve no power for it and it shows.
<br>
<br>
As fish gotta swim and birds do take wing,
<br>
So too, is a dandelion not a rose;
<br>
and you may take me to task for... ]]></description>

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			<pubDate>Wed, 18 Jun 2008 20:36:11 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ When You Were Near ]]></title>
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			<description><![CDATA[ <p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span lang="EN-US">Hello!
<br>
I&#39;ve made some changes based on Sarah&#39;s comments. But I&#39;ve left the orginal poem below the new one so that all can see the differences. Question:
Is the change in tense distracting?
<br>
-Jael
<br>
<br>
New:
<br>
I shudder in the darkness when you are near
<br>
and hold my eyes tight against your touch.
<br>
Do you remember why I flinched in fear?
<br>
<br>
If the pillows weren&#39;t straightened there... ]]></description>

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			<pubDate>Sun, 25 May 2008 10:55:53 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ The Charioteer ]]></title>
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			<description><![CDATA[ <p> I do not need this cart, these hidden wheels,
<br>
they mock what I am and what I have done.</p>

<p>I am in permanent stasis, a warrior:
<br>
I answered and I murdered and then</p>

<p>I married. Painted by another, darkness
<br>
rules where my pierced eyes once bled;</p>

<p>you can see that I cannot mourn myself
<br>
or you, or my wife and mother,</p>

<p>but the ulim and thulim remain.
<br>
My pets, black and white riddlers,  </p>

<p>rest eternally and reveal the secret:
<br>
that... ]]></description>

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			<pubDate>Thu, 03 Apr 2008 15:11:26 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ ok I cant figure this out....help please ]]></title>
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			<description><![CDATA[ <p><strong><font size="6">ATTENTION</font>:</strong> <em><strong>WHAT IS CONSTRUED AS VULGAR LANGUAGE IS PRESENT WITH-IN THIS PIECE.....IN SHORT THERE ARE
CURSE WORDS IN IT....SO IF THIS CONCEPT OFFENDS YOU PLEASE CONTINUE TO ANOTHER POEM AND COMMENT ON IT. THANK YOU
<br></strong> <u><u>ps</u>. moderators if there is a problem with this please inform me to prevent future occurences and delete this post or i can oblige you
and do it.</u></em>
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			<pubDate>Wed, 26 Mar 2008 22:22:55 GMT</pubDate>
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